Friday, April 13, 2012

White, Black, and Shades of Gray


When you were a child your parents always told you what was right and what was wrong, which seemed pretty simple at the time.  As we grew older and matured, our parents weren’t there for us all the time to tell us right from wrong, so we started to cross the line between good and bad quiet often, making bad decisions most of us regret.  Even when we become adults or even grandparents we will not always know what we are doing is the right thing to do.  By doing this assignment, “White, Black, and Shades of Gray”, where we made our own moral scale based on our previous experience really opened my eyes to my past experiences, life, values, and morals.

As I made my moral scale, I needed to bring up experiences in the past where I want to keep hidden in the back of my mind because I was ashamed of what I had done.  By bringing up these past actions, I felt disappointed in myself and my choices. But in doing so, I have been able to reflect on my experiences and what I have learned from each one.  By doing this I realized that I have grown from all of these good and bad decisions I made. I realized that we will continue to make decisions in the future whether we are right or wrong that will allow us to continue to mature and learn from each one making us better people.  

Tuesday, February 28, 2012

Occupy Moanalua



Team Graders protest is about the grading policies throughout teachers. They should all have an equal system and opinion about how to grade. Not only in a certain subject specifically but in every. There should be no such thing as extra credit. They should have the same criteria and opinion on the format on how a test is made and the way homework is done. There shouldn't be such thing as a teacher easier than another. Join us in Mene Square on Friday March 2nd. Come out and support, we will be marching to the Board of Education Office to express exactly what our opinion is on education grading policies.

Wednesday, January 18, 2012

Quarter 3 Rough Draft for Allusion Poem

Based on the Legend and Story of “The Three Menehune of Aniahou”

Venturing through the forest
Skillfully using my tools
To collect my supplies

Looking,
Hearing, Waiting
To use my powers
To help people in need

However, never seen
Always staying hidden
Never wanting to be found
Or acknowledged

Fixing, Planting, Collecting
Many things to do
In such little time
However, working hard
To finish my duties by the morning

In the end,
Always doing what’s right
Even though I am small
I can make a difference

Monday, December 12, 2011

Writing Standards Portfolio

Hey, as a sophomore in Mene Mac we needed to do a Writing Standards Portfolio.  The purpose of this portfolio is to reflect on my essays and what I have learned this semester.  I feel that I have improved as a writer and will continue to grow throughout the year.  Please visit my website to view my portfolio.


Parents: Please answer these questions below as a comment.  Thanks!
  1. What piece of writing did you like best in my portfolio and why?
  2. What did you like about my portfolio and sharing and what would you like to see me improve on?
  3. Which of the writing traits (ideas, organization, voice, word choice, sentence fluency) do you feel was most successful for me?
  4. Which of the traits of writing would you like me to improve on in the coming semester?